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Historical accuracy

Crispin Cross of Lead, Sophia's WarEver since Sir Wal­ter Scott invent­ed his­tor­i­cal fic­tion with his nov­el Waver­ly (1814), there have been many kinds and def­i­n­i­tions of the form.

One of the ques­tions that comes up repeat­ed­ly is his­tor­i­cal accu­ra­cy. It is a com­plex ques­tion and usu­al­ly has an equal­ly com­plex answer. One can try to be accu­rate, but it is almost impos­si­ble to be com­plete­ly accurate.

Start with lan­guage. My Crispin, takes place in 14th Cen­tu­ry Eng­land, at a time when Mid­dle Eng­lish was spo­ken. Nev­er mind that I can­not write Mid­dle Eng­lish, my read­ers could not read it. There­fore, I tried to give the prose a poet­ic beat, to approx­i­mate a Chaucer­ian voice. Dif­fer­ent, but readable.

In Sophia’s War, in which 18th cen­tu­ry colo­nial Eng­lish is spo­ken, I tried to employ word usage of that day, to sug­gest a voice from that time. Thus “Shay-brained,” for sil­ly, or “hurly-burly” for com­mo­tion. In addi­tion, it was use­ful to be aware that colo­nial Eng­lish could be dif­fer­ent from, say, Lon­don Eng­lish of the time. Maybe my read­ers will not catch that, but it is mean­ing­ful to me as a writer.

Some­times I’ve been tak­en to task for putting too much reli­gion in my medieval nov­els, or, for exam­ple, in a nov­el set in the 1950’s for allow­ing my adult char­ac­ters to smoke too many cig­a­rettes. Yet, as far as I am con­cerned, it is the way things were and it helps tell the sto­ry in a vivid his­tor­i­cal context

My approach is to try to dif­fer­en­ti­ate the his­tor­i­cal time from the present time by show­ing how char­ac­ters thought in such and such a time, even as I reveal a phys­i­cal world that is not the con­tem­po­rary world. That said, emo­tions, moti­va­tion, and per­son­al­i­ty must be rec­og­niz­able to my read­ers today.

In short, one wants to avoid pother­a­tion (18th cen­tu­ry Eng­lish for con­fu­sion) while mak­ing the book upstir­ring (18th cen­tu­ry Eng­lish for stimulating).

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