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I miss my old Royal typewriter

Royal TypewriterCur­rent­ly work­ing on a new book (unti­tled) and did what I always have to do: stop work­ing on the com­put­er, print out what I have done, and work on a real page, red pen in hand. It makes (for me) a huge difference

I see things on the print­ed page I don’t see on the com­put­er screen. The rhythm of my prose becomes much clear­er on the print­ed page. I catch dupli­cat­ed words with greater ease. I can make big­ger cuts than I can when on the com­put­er. I have a greater sense of the whole book, its flow and scope.

I’m not sure why. Some­time I think it is because the print­ed page has greater affin­i­ty with a print­ed book. Some­times I think it’s the tac­tile sense of writ­ing. Or that my eyes adjust, or achieve greater clar­i­ty on the print­ed page. Maybe I just like print bet­ter. Maybe it’s my age—the dig­i­tal world being rel­a­tive­ly new. There are times I real­ly miss my old Roy­al typewriter.

I do know that when I read a dig­i­tal book (Nook, Kin­dle, etc.) my eyes slide over the device. It’s as if the words are coat­ed with Teflon. I stick more to a print­ed book.

You writ­ers out there, does it mat­ter how (the mechan­ics) you see your words, write your words? I’m curious.

12 thoughts on “I miss my old Royal typewriter”

  1. I’m grate­ful for the con­ve­niences a com­put­er offers, but I def­i­nite­ly agree with you about edit­ing more effec­tive­ly from the print­ed page.

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  2. I do all my sto­ry plan­ning and out­line, includ­ing, rough scenes long­hand. Then dic­tate, speech-to-text, and/or type it and expand. For edits and rewrite I always work from a print­ed copy for at least two pass­es through and make hand­writ­ten notes for rework or new scenes to write. Like you, I see things more clear­ly on paper while sit­ting with pen­cil in hand. My thoughts flow more naturally.

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  3. “…when I read a dig­i­tal book my eyes slide over the device. It’s as if the words are coat­ed with Teflon.” This is a per­fect descrip­tion of what hap­pens to me, as well. I print regularly–I see things bet­ter and can make things bet­ter, but it is also reas­sur­ing some­how that even if the pages are filled with dri­v­el, it’s get­ting SOMEWHERE. It looks (sort of) like the page of a book etc. I can’t imag­ine work­ing on a type-writer at this point, but a com­bi­na­tion of com­put­er and paper works for me.

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  4. When plot­ting, I have to feel the words flow­ing from a pen over paper. I usu­al­ly write the first page long hand, as well. It helps the sto­ry come alive to me. (A method I again use if I get stuck.)
    After the first draft or two, I print out the sto­ry. It ‘s also eas­i­er for me to catch things on paper than the com­put­er screen. Plus, it’s sat­is­fy­ing to phys­i­cal­ly hold a com­plet­ed project.

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  5. I need a com­put­er to actu­al­ly write, but I pre­fer to brain­storm on the print­ed page.

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  6. I also pre­fer print­ing the pages and writ­ing on them. There is some­thing about the phys­i­cal pages being in your hand that make it eas­i­er to work with. I can quick­ly go from one page to the next. Heav­en bless the inven­tor of the key­board since my hand­writ­ing is get­ting more atro­cious with age, but I must have my neat­ly typed words in my hand when look­ing for flow and clar­i­ty. I can take them and work on them any­where. Lap­top or com­put­er not so convenient.

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  7. Inter­est­ing com­ments. Seems we all need paper and pen or pen­cil (my pref­er­ence). I go back and forth between com­put­er screen and print­outs, sev­er­al times in a day. Use way too many of those over­priced print­er car­tridges, but at least I recycle.

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  8. I write my first draft on com­put­er fast and with lit­tle edit­ing. Revis­ing is a com­bi­na­tion of on screen and on paper. I agree that I see more and bet­ter on sin­gle sheets of paper.

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  9. Now that you’ve fin­ished one book and are start­ing anoth­er, I’d be inter­est­ed in know­ing how you do this. What’s your process? Do you have the new book out­lined and ‘wait­ing in the wings’ at all times, or do you go to the type­writer and work your way into a new sto­ry that way. Any tips? For me, there is such a com­plete­ly dif­fer­ent mind set when tran­si­tion­ing from a full bod­ied com­plet­ed man­u­script to the sparse bones of a new sto­ry. It’s sort of scary plus it feels like com­plete­ly dif­fer­ent writ­ing mus­cles are required. I hope you might con­sid­er address­ing this in a future post. Many thanks for all you share.

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  10. I plan the sto­ry and write the first draft of a chap­ter on a lined “legal” pad with a flow­ing black pen. This pen seems to let the words flow out of my mind. Then I type the chap­ter into my com­put­er, and, like you, print it out and proof­read, using a red pen. That first draft is the hard­est but revi­sions are the reward.

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  11. These reflec­tions are all dif­fer­ent, but have an inter­est­ing sim­i­lar­i­ty, inso­far as there seems to be a con­stant trans­fer from screen to page, page to screen, what ever. Maybe we should call writ­ing a process of shift­ing rest­less words.

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