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Revisions: AI or Not?

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If I have learned any­thing in my career it is that nobody — nobody — writes any­thing very well in one go. True, when writ­ing a nov­el now and again I’ll write a pas­sage, a line, which doesn’t require a rewrite — but tru­ly, that is rare. Good writ­ing requires all but uni­ver­sal rewrit­ing. A lot of it. So, when the mes­sage above appeared on my com­put­er screen I took notice.

Mind, I use the spell/grammar check­er built into my com­put­er. I also use Gram­marly. How do I use these pro­grams?? When I am close to sub­mit­ting the first draft of a nov­el I put the text through these pro­grams. In so doing I catch mis­spellings, word omis­sions, and beyond all else, my place­ment of com­mas, which is not my strong point. I nev­er use these pro­grams to rewrite my text. I am will­ing — want­i­ng — to stand or fall by my own work.

editing a manuscript with a red pen

Regard­ing revi­sions, one of my favorite Samuel John­son sto­ries goes like this:

BOSWELL: Sir, my friend has writ­ten a fine book with many splen­did pas­sages, but no pub­lish­er will take his book. What should he do?

JOHNSON: Tell your friend to remove all his splen­did pas­sages and he will sell his book.

To be sure, in the process of work­ing on a book, there is a vital import from my edi­tor who can (and usu­al­ly does) call for major revi­sions and line changes, even small cor­rec­tions. And, at some point the text is sub­mit­ted to the keen eyes of a copy edi­tor bring­ing for­ward fur­ther changes.

There has also been a long-stand­ing tra­di­tion of the “ghost­writ­ten” book, books put forth as writ­ten by celebri­ties or well-known pub­lic fig­ures, but in fact writ­ten by some­one else. Here is one such famous exam­ple set forth by Wikipedia:

“Trump: The Art of the Deal is a 1987 book cred­it­ed to Don­ald J. Trump and jour­nal­ist Tony Schwartz. Part mem­oir and part busi­ness advice book, it was the first book cred­it­ed to Trump, and it helped to make him a house­hold name. It reached num­ber 1 on The New York Times Best Sell­er list, stayed there for 13 weeks, and alto­geth­er held a posi­tion on the list for 48 weeks.

Trump cit­ed it as one of his proud­est accom­plish­ments and his sec­ond-favorite book after the Bible. Schwartz called writ­ing the book his “great­est regret in life, with­out ques­tion,” and both he and the book’s pub­lish­er, Howard Kamin­sky, alleged that Trump had played no role in the actu­al writ­ing of the book. Trump has per­son­al­ly giv­en con­flict­ing accounts on the ques­tion of authorship.”

As for Grammarly’s offer to pro­vide quick rewrit­ing (“and more”) by way of AI, I am sure that in the not-too-dis­tant future, a book will pop up on some best-sell­ing list, which, after the fact, will be revealed to have been com­plete­ly writ­ten by a com­put­er. It will hap­pen. I’m sure of it.

But I believe that each writer is unique and the writ­ing that results is per­son­al, con­vey­ing the writer’s indi­vid­ual vision, emo­tions, and under­stand­ing of life. No machine can match that. I nev­er want it to.

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