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Interconnectedness

interconnectednessI write most­ly nov­els, and it’s that form I know best. So I believe that, more than any­thing, a novel’s inter­con­nect­ed­ness is what can make it pow­er­ful. The nov­el tries to repli­cate a life or lives by pro­vid­ing a myr­i­ad of inci­dents, influ­ences, envi­ron­ments, events, words, hints, sug­ges­tions, and even thoughts which shape what hap­pens to the char­ac­ters. Too much detail makes heavy going. Too lit­tle makes the work float away. It’s not the right word that mat­ters as much as the right detail. When read­ers respond to what they call a book’s details, I think they are react­ing to under­stand­able repli­ca­tions of depict­ed lives. And depict­ed is a good word, inso­far as good writ­ing allows the read­er to ful­ly see what is hap­pen­ing. There­in lays the skill of the indi­vid­ual writer, who presents his or her vision. There are the min­i­mal­ists (ear­ly Hem­ing­way) and there are the loaded con­tain­er ships (like Hen­ry James). Not bet­ter or worse, but enrich­ing for the read­er who ulti­mate­ly is the per­son who must see what there is to see. And if he/she sees the con­nec­tion between the first and last page it’s so much bet­ter. That’s why I don’t think you can’t write a good first page, until you write a good last page. Which is to say, it’s only when you have the com­plete sto­ry, that the first page (which you wrote so long ago) can be rewrit­ten so that it con­nects to the last page. 

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