In a couple of days I will read my new book to a class of fifth graders. What do I do? I go through the book yet again. I bring the text up on my computer. I change the font. I change the background color. Why? I want to see the book in a slightly different fashion.
I read through the book. But I am not so much reading the book as I am hearing it. I make many small changes. But they are important, subtle things. Changes of tone. Of emphasis. I catch repetitious words, phrases, yes, mistakes. Spelling. Grammar. I make cuts. Rule number one: a book always needs to be tighter. It needs to drive forward. Once in a while I will make bigger changes, and that in turn leads to other shifts. You might say I’m almost panicky, but that’s a good thing. I’m forcing myself to be objective, to grasp what I’ve written. To be self-critical. Even so, when I read the book to the class, I’ll have a pen in hand, ready to mark out more changes. I can’t be perfect, but I can always be better. For readers.
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Cheers, Avi. Your process is an inspiration to authors everywhere. I thought you might enjoy this that I posted earlier in the year about hearing and tasting our work: http://emmaddryden.blogspot.com/2013/03/hearing-and-tasting-our-work.html