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At just the right moment

Big WordsAs you write, there is a nor­mal ten­den­cy to use a par­tic­u­lar word often. I once com­pared notes with a bunch of writ­ers and we shared, as it were, words that we tend­ed to use a lot and then had to edit out. The dif­fer­ent writ­ers each had unique words.

Some­times, it is the nature of a par­tic­u­lar sto­ry that one word keeps crop­ping up, words like “pan­icky,” or “beau­ti­ful,” or “gigan­tic.” It hap­pens because it is inher­ent in the nature of the sto­ry, and for the writer the word is a short­cut to emo­tion­al con­ti­nu­ity, par­tic­u­lar­ly in a first draft. The prob­lem is not the use of such rep­e­ti­tion, but that they must be pulled. Why pulled? Because these big words—if I may call them that—if used too often are dilut­ed in terms of the impact they have on the read­er. If the char­ac­ter is pan­icky once, that car­ries a strong impres­sion. If the char­ac­ter is pan­icky ten times, it becomes a rep­e­ti­tious quirk, which may even be fun­ny, just when you don’t want to be.

Aside from your own eye and ear, com­put­ers make it easy to track down such rep­e­ti­tious use of words, by going to the word search function.

The great French 19th Cen­tu­ry nov­el­ist Flaubert, spoke of choos­ing the right word (“la mot juste”) for the right moment. That also means hold­ing back the right word for just the right moment.

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