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Entitlement

Your Title HereThe Eng­lish word title, as in title of a book, is very old, a part of Old Eng­lish vocab­u­lary. They are very hard to write. [You can read what I have writ­ten here about some of my titles in a March 19, 2012 post­ing]. Some­times a title emerges ear­ly in the book writ­ing process. How­ev­er, some­times that doesn’t work—or is reject­ed as not help­ful for a vari­ety of reasons—and you have to cre­ate one. This is cur­rent because my edi­tor and I have been try­ing to find a title for a new col­lec­tion of short sto­ries. It does not help inso­far as this is a col­lec­tion of sto­ries, and try­ing to find a title that embraces all has been dif­fi­cult. Between us, going back and forth, I think we have come up with some­thing like fif­teen titles—none of them working.

What do you want in a title? The title is often the first con­tact a poten­tial read­er has with a book. They may well hear of it before they ever see the actu­al book. There­fore, it is enor­mous­ly impor­tant. It should have some ener­gy. (Sophia’s War) It should be strong­ly sug­ges­tive of the book’s con­tent. (Catch You Lat­er, Trai­tor) It is great if you can extract a key line from your book. (City of Orphans) It helps if it is orig­i­nal. (Iron Thun­der) (One title we came up with had been used more than fif­teen times!) If it has a mean­ing all of its own, so much the bet­ter. (The Book with­out Words) More­over, as an edi­tor once sug­gest­ed to me, in this age of the inter­net, with tiny cov­er images on the screen, the few­er the words the bet­ter. (Old Wolf)

Have we come up with a title? We have. Will I post it here? No. Why? I’m bet­ting it will change yet again.

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