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Do over

starting overYears ago an edi­tor accept­ed a man­u­script for a book I had writ­ten, signed a con­tract, and things were mov­ing for­ward, (I thought) when the same edi­tor called and said, “I have a problem.”

I asked, “What is it?”

Edi­tor: “I can’t pub­lish this book. It’s no good.”

“None of it?” 

Pause.

“You can keep the title.”

A true pub­lish­ing tale, but my real point here is that it’s one thing to revise a man­u­script. It is very much hard­er to com­plete­ly rewrite a man­u­script. When you have worked through a whole story—set the grooves, so to speak—it’s dif­fi­cult to cut grooves in a dif­fer­ent direc­tion. It is per­haps even hard­er when an edi­tor (a dif­fer­ent true expe­ri­ence) only tells you that your sto­ry is basi­cal­ly there, but you have to rethink your whole book. It is at that point your edi­tor (or some out­side view) becomes absolute­ly cru­cial. It’s not enough to be told, “Rethink,” you need out­side thoughts, sug­ges­tions, and advice—to pull you around and get you going in a dif­fer­ent direction

As for that book about which I was told “I could keep the title,” you may be pleased to know it was even­tu­al­ly pub­lished. But—from the time I first began to write it, until it was pub­lished, was four­teen years. The title—I did not keep the orig­i­nal title—was Bright Shad­ow.

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