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Avi’s 2025 Summer Blog Series

Bruce Coville

From Avi: As I have for the last three sum­mers, (sum­mer of 2024, sum­mer of 2023, sum­mer of 2022) I’ve invit­ed 13 admired authors to write for my blog for the next three months. I hope you’ll tune in each Tues­day to see who answered this year’s ques­tion, which we hope pro­vides you with inspi­ra­tion. And by the end of the sum­mer, you’ll have new authors to follow!

What’s your favorite strategy for encouraging young people to read?

Start Where the Readers Are

What­ev­er your aspi­ra­tions for a book or sto­ry are, it will not have any effect if you can’t get kids to read it! To make that hap­pen, you need to start where the read­ers are, not where you want them to end up.

To put it anoth­er way, if you are stand­ing on top of the moun­tain of good taste and shout­ing down to the kids at the bot­tom who are rac­ing around and hav­ing a good time, sim­ply call­ing, “Come on up, the view is inspir­ing” is not going to have any effect. To draw in the read­er, you have to start at the bot­tom of the moun­tain and give them a rea­son to join you on the jour­ney up.

One of the best ways to do this is to begin with some­thing that will evoke a laugh. Kids love to laugh. So if you can get a chuck­le on the first page, or even bet­ter, with the first line, you’ve set the hook.

Let me give you a cou­ple of examples.

Jennifer Murdley's ToadJen­nifer Murdley’s Toad is about a girl who is home­ly. Yeah, yeah — grown-ups like to say “All chil­dren are beau­ti­ful.” Sad­ly, kids know that this is a lie … and the ones who know it best are the ones that don’t match our culture’s stan­dard image of pret­ty. So the sto­ry is about a girl who feels the pain of know­ing she is not beautiful.

Tell that to a kid and see how far you get.

But here’s the first line: “If Jen­nifer Mur­d­ley hadn’t been forced to wear her bother’s under­pants to school that day, the whole thing might nev­er have happened.”

This announces that there is some fun in store. (Words like fart, booger, naked, and under­wear are cat­nip for young read­ers.) For the child read­ing the sto­ry, any “les­son” is ancil­lary to the main rea­son for read­ing the book, which is to have a good time.

The Dragonslayers Bruce CovilleHere’s anoth­er one: The Drag­on­slay­ers is a book that deals with female empow­er­ment, and also with the destruc­tive peer pres­sure exert­ed on boys to not try too hard, or be too good, for fear of being called out as a geek or a brown-noser. But there’s no hint of that in the open­ing line, “Do you have the lizard snot?”

If you start where the kids are and let them know up front that there’s a good time to be had, then they will hap­pi­ly fol­low you as you lead them up the moun­tain to see the wider and grander view.

Particulars

The Dragonslayers Bruce Coville
The Drag­on­slay­ers

I’ve been writ­ing sto­ries for kids for over 40 years. In that time I’ve pub­lished over 100 books, includ­ing My Teacher is an Alien, Into the Land of Uni­corns, and Jere­my Thatch­er, Drag­on Hatch­er. Take a flight over to Bruce Coville’s web­site. There are books, audio books, tele­vi­sion shows, and more to explore.

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