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Writing a series

I may be wrong, but I think it was Ross McDonĀ­ald (he wrote the highĀ­ly sucĀ­cessĀ­ful Archer series of crime novĀ­els) who sugĀ­gestĀ­ed that if you intend to write a series, start off by writĀ­ing three or four of them, so you get, not just the sequencĀ­ing right, but the main charĀ­acĀ­ters right. 

I have writĀ­ten a numĀ­ber of series—the CapĀ­tain Gray books, Crispin Books, the PopĀ­py books, MidĀ­night MagĀ­ic books—and nevĀ­er havĀ­ing done what he urged, I think he’s right. 

The Secret SchoolThe thought comes into my head as I attempt to write a sequel to The Secret School. The origĀ­iĀ­nal was writĀ­ten twenĀ­ty years ago and was comĀ­posed for seriĀ­alĀ­izaĀ­tion in newspapers—published by BreakĀ­fast SeriĀ­als. It was subĀ­seĀ­quentĀ­ly rewritĀ­ten and pubĀ­lished in book form by HarĀ­court. HarĀ­court was acquired by LitĀ­tle Brown. LitĀ­tle Brown requestĀ­ed a sequel and I agreed to do it. 

That seemed reaĀ­sonĀ­able, but— 

Since I nevĀ­er intendĀ­ed a sequel, I had no idea what the plot might be. 

The daughĀ­ter of an ediĀ­tor friend of mine who had loved the origĀ­iĀ­nal, when I asked her what the sequel should be about replied, ā€œIt has to be about how Ida (the proĀ­tagĀ­oĀ­nist) goes to high school.ā€ 

That made sense, but– 

The origĀ­iĀ­nal stoĀ­ry covĀ­ered a time periĀ­od of some six weeks. 

High school is a four-year project. 

And when I went and re-read that origĀ­iĀ­nal, othĀ­er than describĀ­ing Ida Bidson’s height—which is imporĀ­tant in the origĀ­iĀ­nal book–there is no descripĀ­tion of what she even looks like. 

Beyond all that the origĀ­iĀ­nal stoĀ­ry was much-loved. How could I posĀ­siĀ­bly capĀ­ture its attracĀ­tion and energy? 

But I have agreed to write the book.

It’s been a process of getĀ­ting back into charĀ­acĀ­ter, psyĀ­cholĀ­oĀ­gy, place, style, vocabĀ­uĀ­lary, hisĀ­torĀ­iĀ­cal moment, life in a small-town high school—in the year 1925. 

I should have lisĀ­tened to Ross McDonĀ­ald. But I didn’t. 

Would you be surĀ­prised if I tell you it’s going slowly? 

Stay tuned.

9 thoughts on “Writing a series”

  1. Oh I will stay tuned. I am sure it will all come to you evenĀ­tuĀ­alĀ­ly. I love you letĀ­ting us in on your process!

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  2. PS My friend attendĀ­ed a one room school near BufĀ­faĀ­lo, NY. She is a poet and writer and about 81 or 82 with a good memĀ­oĀ­ry so if you would like to hear her stoĀ­ries I am sure she would be very eager to share.

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  3. Can’t wait to see what hapĀ­pens with Ida next! I adore the origĀ­iĀ­nal book which I now will view as Part 1 in a series!! Lots can hapĀ­pen in high school!

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  4. By some astoundĀ­ing coinĀ­ciĀ­dence I just picked up The Secret School today and read it entireĀ­ly in the afterĀ­noon. It was so marĀ­velous that I had to find out more which lead me to this blog and the posĀ­siĀ­bilĀ­iĀ­ty that my kids and I will be able to read a sequel. Joy!

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  5. I nevĀ­er write my stand-alones with the intenĀ­tion for a series, but now I find that a couĀ­ple of them could be, *if* the first sells and does well. (No small IF, that šŸ˜‰ )
    I think Ross MacĀ­DonĀ­ald’s advice is right, though it also feels preĀ­sumpĀ­tuĀ­ous in a way for mid-lisĀ­ters. But we have to get over that, don’t we.
    Good luck with yours. If anyĀ­one can, you can.

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