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Avi’s Summer Blog Series 2026

Gary D. Schmidt

From Avi: Just as we’ve done for the last four sum­mers, 2025 through 2022, I’ve invit­ed 13 admired authors to write for my blog through­out the sum­mer. I hope you’ll tune in each Tues­day to see who answered this year’s ques­tion, which we hope pro­vides you and the young peo­ple in your life with inspi­ra­tion. Whether you already read these authors’ books or we’re intro­duc­ing them to you, we trust you’ll find new books to read!

What advice can you give so I can become a writer?
teen writing in the sunlight under a summer tree
What Do You Need to Be a Writer?
The Answer is Simple: A Garden — or a Dog, One. 

Bear with me for a moment and we’ll get to the strange title.

When St. Augus­tine was work­ing on his De Rhetor­i­ca, he began by try­ing to define what words are — not a bad place to start. He con­clud­ed that words are signs of real things. That is, the writer can’t draft a man­u­script about, say, hors­es and cat­tle by drag­ging hors­es and cat­tle between the pages of a bound book. He uses the word horse and cat­tle as a sign of those real ani­mals, with all of their hooves and legs and hair and stom­achs and blood and guts and manure and so on. Words evoke real things, St. Augus­tine argues. Thus, for exam­ple, the word smoke is a stand-in for the real thing, that tac­tile cloud of smells and heat.

So far so good.

Then, Augus­tine said, words as signs can also be signs that point to fur­ther mean­ing. So, the word smoke can be a sign for the real thing — but it can also sig­ni­fy more than itself: smoke can also point to or sig­ni­fy fire. The writer under­stands this, of course; if I write, Smoke was pour­ing out of the win­dow, the read­er under­stands that the writer is sig­nal­ing that the house is on fire. Or, if I write, The smoke was blind­ing the cub scout’s eyes, the read­er can fig­ure out that the camp­fire is at least smoldering.

And giv­en this, writes St. Augus­tine, we under­stand that the writer is not lim­it­ed; the writer can go fur­ther from the imme­di­ate sign. We may move, say, from the real thing, to the word that sig­ni­fies the real thing, to some fur­ther con­crete thing that the word might sig­ni­fy: real smoke, to the word smoke, to (in the reader’s imag­i­na­tion) a fur­ther real thing — in this case, fire.

But the beau­ty of lan­guage is that you can keep going even fur­ther, St. Augus­tine sug­gests. I might stay con­crete for a time: smoke sug­gests a camp­fire, or a con­fla­gra­tion, or per­haps a pol­lu­tant, and so on. Or — and here we get real­ly inter­est­ing — maybe the word as a sign will lead to abstrac­tion. Smoke might lead to antic­i­pa­tion: Slow­ly, wisps of smoke arose from the green wood. It might lead to expec­ta­tion: “It’s real­ly true,” she said. “Where there’s smoke, there’s fire.” It might lead to metaphor: “Don’t try to blow smoke in my eyes,” said her father. “I know what you did, and why you did it.” Or some­thing like this: He meant to deceive. The more he spoke, the more the meet­ing room seemed to fill with thick smoke. It became hard to breath.

One of the extra­or­di­nary qual­i­ties of lan­guage is, St. Augus­tine sug­gests, its end­less adapt­abil­i­ty to the writer’s needs. Smoke can sig­ni­fy a real phys­i­cal phe­nom­e­non, AND it can be used imag­i­na­tive­ly in infi­nite vari­a­tion to play with and adapt the phys­i­cal mean­ing to abstract circumstances.

Bleak House by Charles DickensNow, it feels like writ­ers know this, often instinc­tive­ly. But some­times it is very, very good to stop for a moment and con­sid­er that when we writ­ers work with words, we are work­ing with real­i­ties, and that is no small thing. So con­sid­er, for exam­ple, the open­ing to Charles Dick­ens’ Bleak House — a nov­el that could eas­i­ly func­tion as its own writ­ing work­shop. The nov­el begins with a sin­gle word: Fog. Dick­ens then goes on to give a string of sen­tence frag­ments, most of them begin­ning with the word Fog. Depend­ing on what edi­tion you have — and as I write this I’m hold­ing a first edi­tion, because I can be a snot about stuff like this — these frag­ments might take up most of the first page, with the word fog repeat­ed again and again and again. And each time, the word is used to sig­ni­fy the con­crete, visu­al, tac­tile thing that no one knows bet­ter than a Londoner.

But, very quick­ly we learn as read­ers that its larg­er metaphor­ic mean­ing is com­ing right behind all of this: fog also sig­ni­fies the legal sys­tem that is so con­fused and impen­e­tra­ble and unjust that the courts can­not hope to come to a just deci­sion — nor do they want to. And this depress­ing mean­ing dom­i­nates the nov­el right up to the next famous frag­ments, when Lit­tle Joe is dying on the street and, as dark­ness comes to him, Dick­ens steps out of the nov­el and speaks direct­ly to Queen Vic­to­ria, not as the con­struct­ed nar­ra­tor, but as the man Dick­ens: “Dead, your Majesty … And dying thus around us every day.” How can this be pos­si­ble? he asks. What kind of fog do we live in that we would allow such a thing to hap­pen daily?

We writ­ers deal with words, and it serves us well to remem­ber that words are signs of real things. We work with­in our imag­i­na­tions, but we speak of con­crete real­i­ties. Even when we invoke abstrac­tions, we begin our move­ment to those abstrac­tions, says St. Augus­tine, with the physical.

So, he insists — and so should we all — that writ­ers are ground­ed in real­i­ties — and notice please how even my choice of the word ground sug­gests my depen­dence on your know­ing and respect­ing the real­i­ty in order to con­vey the mean­ing for which I’m reaching.

puppy dog wandering through a garden

And so, what do I think the writer needs? I think that writ­ers need to work like dogs to devel­op their craft in every way — but along that way, they need a real dog to mess around with. To see in the world the deep and abid­ing real­i­ty of a dog’s play­ful­ness, its eyes-on-you alert­ness, its quick under­stand­ing, its adap­ta­tions to sud­den events, its sharp and keen knowl­edge of its entire envi­ron­ment, its com­ic grins, its ears-for­ward antic­i­pa­tions, the rev­e­la­tions of the posi­tion of the tail. Dogs don’t give a rip about abstrac­tions; they cen­ter in the physical.

And sor­ry, but cats just won’t do here. Dogs know that they con­stant­ly have to work at the real world to win it. Cats think they already own it.

And if not a dog, then a gar­den will do for the writer. We need the smell of soil and manure. We need the tac­tile feel of real earth, the way it plays with the fin­gers when it’s rich. We need the phys­i­cal sen­sa­tion of plant­i­ng to remem­ber deep down to believe and under­stand that ideas can come to fruition. We need to pull weeds to remem­ber how ful­fill­ing it is to prune the wordy sen­tence, or to thin car­rots so as to under­stand that thin­ning real­ly does allow the impor­tant stuff to grow. We need to under­stand the role of the sea­sons to know the unfold­ing of time.

“Humankind can­not bear very much real­i­ty,” wrote T. S. Eliot in The Four Quar­tets. Maybe. But cer­tain­ly the writer can­not work with too little.

Find your real­i­ty, and bury your hands in it, live with it, rev­el in it — whether it is a dog or a gar­den, whether it is bak­ing bread, walk­ing to the park with your kid­do, trekking into the wilder­ness or an urban land­scape, wrestling with the pat­terns of a com­pli­cat­ed quilt. Love the real world, and then you will have some­thing to say. Dis­tance your­self from real­i­ty, and you won’t have very much at all to say about the world that is so very, very phys­i­cal, and which is expe­ri­enced through its physicality.

A dog or a gar­den will teach you that every time.

Oh, and one thing more about St. Augus­tine, who was always kind to human need. He acknowl­edges that as words, being used as signs, move fur­ther and fur­ther from the con­crete, phys­i­cal mean­ing, they may become con­fus­ing in terms of their con­nec­tions. The move from smoke, to fire, to (say) enthu­si­asm, to (say) illu­mi­na­tion might get con­vo­lut­ed. So, then, how do we make sense of these connections?

Augus­tine acknowl­edges that per­haps it is hard to know, but he offers one bit of advice about such dis­cern­ment: writ­ers should look for beau­ty in their lan­guage. That will be the guide.

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Gary D. Schmidt
Gary D. Schmidt

Gary D. Schmidt’s most recent nov­el is Styx and Stones (Clar­i­on, 2026), authored with Ron Koertge. 

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