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In Praise of Muddles

Head­line:
“Last year, forty per­cent of Amer­i­cans
did not read even one book.”

“You don’t have to burn books to destroy a cul­ture.
Just get peo­ple to stop read­ing them.” —Ray Bradbury

In a time of cul­tur­al and polit­i­cal cri­sis, how should an artist respond? If you are Bruce Spring­steen, you write a song called “Streets of Min­neapo­lis,” an anti-ICE protest song, and it hits No. 1 on iTunes.

But if you write books for young peo­ple — books which take a few years to cre­ate — which is to say, an uncer­tain future — how do you go about your work?

I have a dis­like of ide­olo­gies, all ide­olo­gies, because they more often than not pro­vide you with auto­mat­ic respons­es to what­ev­er is hap­pen­ing. Hav­ing a siloed sys­tem of think­ing means you are not think­ing for your­self, but flip­ping through an index of answers, which you can peel off and slap onto any event. Do that and, in my view, you are abdi­cat­ing in shar­ing your own emo­tions and thoughts.

When you write for young peo­ple, as I do, I think your respon­si­bil­i­ty is to cre­ate depth of char­ac­ter and sit­u­a­tion so as to pro­vide a glimpse of real life. It’s not because you are teach­ing young peo­ple, but because you are try­ing to expose them to the com­plex­i­ties of existence.

One of the key aspects of read­ing — and why I think the decline of read­ing is so alarm­ing — is that read­ing helps to cre­ate greater empa­thy toward peo­ple and soci­ety. When you read, you absorb occur­rences you would not — in your every­day life — deal with.

Read­ing fic­tion is a key way we learn how to exper­i­ment with peo­ple, places, and per­plex­i­ty that we might oth­er­wise nev­er expe­ri­ence. When you are read­ing about expe­ri­ences you might, in fact, con­front, you gain even more. I’m not ref­er­enc­ing sto­ries that are com­posed in order to teach a moral les­son, but tales that have — as all good sto­ries have — real dilemmas.

As a young read­er once wrote to me, a good sto­ry “has a begin­ning, a mud­dle, and an end.” It is that mud­dle that is so cru­cial: how does one deal with it?

A good story has a beginning, a muddle, and an end.

I am in the process of work­ing out a new sto­ry — very much at the begin­ning — when the hor­ri­ble immi­gra­tion enforce­ment cri­sis — explod­ed in my face, and thoughts. 

How do I — should I — incor­po­rate my respons­es to those real events into the fic­tion I am cre­at­ing? I have my own respons­es, and I am appalled by what is hap­pen­ing. But the sto­ry I am try­ing to write has noth­ing to do with the sit­u­a­tion. Do I incor­po­rate my feel­ings about the cur­rent sit­u­a­tion into this tale?

I think the answer has to be that I must cre­ate a sto­ry that is deeply human, that is, filled with all of life’s com­plex­i­ty that I can set down on the page. I must not com­pose easy answers. I don’t want to teach; I want to share a piece of life, so the read­er can engage with it.

Thus, to answer my ques­tion, do I incor­po­rate my feel­ings about the cur­rent sit­u­a­tion into this tale? My answer is no, real­iz­ing (and trust­ing) as I do that my response will still inevitably be embed­ded some­where — how­ev­er slight — into my writ­ing. That is what I try to write about: the muddle.

Nothing But the Truth

On the first page of my book, Noth­ing but the Truth, you will find this:

“Two Ques­tions.

“Do you swear to tell the truth, the whole truth, and noth­ing but the truth?

“Does any­one say no?”

It’s the mud­dle about which I always want to write.

2 thoughts on “In Praise of Muddles”

  1. Anoth­er of your blogs I will read over and over again. You nailed it in the val­ue of writ­ing for young peo­ple: the com­plex­i­ty of life choic­es in sto­ries. It’s not to teach, but for the read­er to explore and the writer to offer as much clar­i­ty as pos­si­ble. Thank you, Avi. Edie

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  2. My sev­enth-grade stu­dents just fin­ished read­ing Noth­ing But The Truth, and they loved it. As we read, we explored the ques­tion of what can blur the lines between what’s real and what’s not. They were sur­prised by how such an “old” book (LOL!) can be so rel­e­vant today. We have had so many great dis­cus­sions dur­ing our read­ing. Thank you for this book, and thank you for this blog post.

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